Personal Anecdotes In Essays

I. What is an Anecdote?

An anecdote (pronounced an-ik-doh-tuh) is a very short story that is significant to the topic at hand; usually adding personal knowledge or experience to the topic. Basically, anecdotes are stories. Like many stories, anecdotes are most often told through speech; they are spoken rather than written down.

The term “anecdote” originally comes from the Greek phrase ἀνέκδοτα , meaning “things unpublished.”


II. Examples of Anecdotes

Example 1

Picture a mother and a father discussing whether or not to get a dog for the family. The father says:

You know, when I was a kid, my dog was my best friend. My childhood was better because of him.

The mother contemplates his story—a.k.a. his anecdote—and then agrees that they should get a dog.

Example 2

Sometimes anecdotes are funny or effective because they interrupt an important moment. Imagine a big wedding dinner on a TV sitcom. The best man is giving a speech, when suddenly another guest, clearly drunk, stands up and yells:

That reminds me of a wild party I went to with the groom, before he got that new ball and chain! If you had told me back then that he would choose just ONE woman, I never would have believed it!

The audience laughs at his drunken anecdote, while the bride looks at the groom in anger. Here, the anecdote brings both humor and tension to the moment.

Example 3

Anecdotes can be as simple as a relative joke. Picture a group of friends discussing their Halloween costumes for this year. One friend says:

I was an owl last year—it was a real hoot!

Her friends groan and giggle. Here, the anecdote is told just to bring laughter.


III. Types of Anecdotes

Anecdotes can be presented in an endless number of forms. Below are several typical types of anecdotes.

a. Humorous

An anecdote that adds humor to the topic at hand. For example, two friends are arguing about driving directions. The driver tells the passenger to turn off the GPS, insisting that he knows the way. The passenger replies, “oh, like the time we turned it off and ended up out in the middle of that cow farm?!”  We then see a flashback of their car surrounded by loudly mooing cows.

b. Reminiscent

A story that remembers something general about the past or a specific event, expressed in ways such as “that reminds me of…”, “when I used to…”, “I remember when…”, and so on. For example, a child asks her grandmother for $2 to buy candy at the store, and the grandmother says, “you know back in my day, all you needed was a penny to go to the candy shop! My grandmother would give me a nickel and I’d be a happy clam!”

c. Philosophical

An anecdote expressed in order to make others think more deeply about the topic at hand. For example, a group of college students are discussing the morality of lying; most are arguing that it is never okay to lie. One student offers an anecdote to the others: “what about families who lied to German soldiers, you know, about hiding Jews in their homes during World War II? Do the lives saved justify the lies they told?” The students then contemplate the validity of their prior arguments.

d. Inspirational

An anecdote that is told in order to inspire hope or other positive emotions. They are often about not giving up, achieving goals or dreams, making the impossible possible, and so on. For example, a doctor talking to a group of war amputees tells them about a soldier who came in with no hands and no hope—but left the hospital holding his newborn baby in his prosthetic hands.

e. Cautionary

Stories that warn others about the dangers or negative consequences surrounding the topic at hand. For example, a speaker is giving a talk to teenagers about the risks of using drugs. During his presentation, he reminds them of a well-known straight-A student who died of a heroin overdose a few years before; warning them that it could happen to anyone.


IV. Importance of Anecdotes

Anecdotes, like other forms of stories, are common and highly effective devices found throughout literature, film, television, theater, and even real life. Anecdotes make conversations or dialogue more personal and interesting. Usually, they are employed in a way that will make the audience and/or other characters laugh or think more deeply about a topic.


V. Examples of Anecdotes in Literature

Example 1

A very famous anecdote in literature is from Swann’s Way of Marcel Proust’s In Search of Lost Time novels, when he recalls a specific time that he ate a madeleine cookie. Below is a small selection from this memory:

Many years had elapsed during which nothing of Combray, save what was comprised in the theatre and the drama of my going to bed there, had any existence for me, when one day in winter, as I came home, my mother, seeing that I was cold, offered me some tea, a thing I did not ordinarily take. I declined at first, and then, for no particular reason, changed my mind. She sent out for one of those short, plump little cakes called ‘petites madeleines,’ which look as though they had been moulded in the fluted scallop of a pilgrim’s shell.

Proust uses this anecdote in part of an ongoing discussion on memory and remembrance of the past. For him, this particular childhood moment represents one of his strongest and most intense memories, particularly of those tied to senses.

Example 2

In Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire, Albus Dumbledore is having a conversation with a visiting headmaster about the knowledge they have of their own castles. Dumbledore then says:

Oh, I would never dream of assuming I know all Hogwarts’ secrets, Igor. Only this morning, for instance, I took a wrong turn on the way to the bathroom and found myself in a beautifully proportioned room I had never seen before, containing a really rather magnificent collection of chamber pots. When I went back to investigate more closely, I discovered that the room had vanished.

Dumbledore’s brief story is related to their conversation; it gives a personal example to support his view on the topic, and provides something for Igor to ponder. Furthermore, the anecdote makes Dumbledore appear humble against his visitor’s prideful attitude.

Example 3

Anecdotes don’t always have to be personal; some are just interesting stories about specific people or subjects. The Book of Three Hundred Anecdotes, for instance, includes 300 brief stories about topics from affection to librarians to war. The following anecdote is from the topic “Forgiveness”:

Mariè Antoinette.—On the elevation of this princess to the throne after the death of Louis XV., an officer of the body-guard, who had given her offence on some former occasion, expressed his intention of resigning his commission; but the queen forbade him. “Remain,” said she, “forget the past as I forgive it.”

Each of the anecdotes provides a brief account of something related to its adjacent topic. The book is filled with similar stories referencing historical figures, places, books, ideas, etc for each topic included; providing anecdotes for any and all conversations.


VI. Examples of Anecdotes in Pop Culture

Example 1

Sometimes anecdotes can bring up the past while also foreshadowing the future. In the movie, The Lord of the Rings: The Fellowship of the Ring, Gandalf shows the Fellowship the mines in Moria, where they tirelessly mined for Mithril, a valuable metal. He then shares a short relative story—an anecdote—about how Bilbo once had a shirt made of Mithril. The audience already knows that Frodo now has that very shirt, thus Gandalf’s anecdote teaches the Fellowship something about Mithril while simultaneously foreshadowing that the shirt will be important in the future.

Example 2

The comedyModern Family is full of funny anecdotes. In this scene, Phil has a gift for Claire followed by an anecdote about the gift. He then has a subsequent anecdote about how “easy” it was to get the porch swing:

Claire: What is it?
Phil: It’s the actual porch swing where we had our first kiss.
Claire: No.
Phil: Check it out. The carvings are still on the back from 25 years ago.
Claire: Oh, my gosh. “Phil hearts Claire.” Oh, honey, this is gonna look so great out on our porch. I can’t believe you did this. Wow!
Phil: It was nothing. I made a few calls, – drove half a day –
Claire: Uh-huh.
Phil: had Campari and haggled with a handsy gay landlord, took the swing apart, loaded it in a van, ran out of gas in the desert, got harassed by a shady state trooper, and drove back with a blinding migraine. But easy-peasy.


VII. Related Terms


A quote is something that has been said by a person, not necessarily a story. Sometimes, quotes are used as anecdotes, which leads some to wrongly use the terms “anecdote” and “quote” interchangeably.

VII. Conclusion

In conclusion, anecdotes are valuable literary devices because of their diversity in style, tone, and utility—they can be used by almost any person, in any situation, in any genre. Like any story shared with others, anecdotes serve countless purposes and make situations more interesting for both the characters and the audience. An anecdote is a timeless device that is used across literature, film, television and theater, and has been benefiting storytellers for centuries.

Phil's Romantic Surprise – Modern Family 8×12

An anecdote is a little story that writers use to enrich their articles. Anecdotes flavor articles by adding a human quality to them, by giving inside information about small things that actually happened to people, and often by giving insights into human frailties, characteristics, and qualities that could not be shown as vividly any other way.

Almost everyone is familiar with the anecdote–Reader’s Digest publishes dozens of short, humorous ones each month. Within an article, an anecdote doesn’t have to have a punch line. But it does have to have a point–a point related to the point you are making in the article.

In his book The Writer’s Complete Guide to Conducting Interviews, freelancer Michael Schumacher used a personal anecdote to reinforce his advice to leave your tape recorder on as long as possible:

I learned this lesson the hard way, years ago, when I interviewed author Norman Mailer. As soon as we had concluded the formal questioning in the interview, I packed my tape recorder and notebook into my shoulder bag, while Mailer signed the books I’d brought to the interview. At one point, he asked me if I’d ever worked on a book-length project, and I told him I was working on a novel. While he inscribed my books, Mailer talked about the problems he had had in finishing some of his books; he spoke of how tough it was to write novels and gave me a few words of encouragement. While he was talking, I couldn’t help but think about my packed-away tape recorder. Some of Mailer’s observations were as good as anything he’d given me during the interview itself.

Notice how Schumacher’s anecdote is a story in itself: It has a beginning that sets the scene, a body that describes what happened during the incident, and a conclusion that drives home the story’s point. The anecdotes in your articles–whether they come from your own experience or are told to you by someone you interview–should follow the same beginning-middle-end structure.

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