My Dream Essay For Class 6

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Feb 14, 2017

“My Future, My Choice” Essay Contest

In an effort to engage students in the conversation around school choice, CEAM hosted middle school and high school essay contests. These essays amplify the voices of those that are most impacted by school choice – the children. Many times, we overlook the voices of those most affected by education policy decisions. This contest was focused on giving students in the St. Louis area a voice and an opportunity to express their opinions on education.  Congratulations to all the winners and participants!

What would the ideal high school for you look like and why?

3rd Place – Rachel Mueller, 9th grade

“Luckily, in 7th grade I started to attend an arts school. My creativity began to burst out again and my grades began to rise. Because of this experience, my ideal high school would be a place where they don’t cut the arts but bring it into everyday classes–where you don’t just sit and take notes, you sit and think.”

2nd Place – Rei-zhana Adams, 12th grade

“My ideal high school’s motto would be ‘Learning to Love Learning.’ It’s very structure would first foster the social, physical and emotional well-being before academics because students learn better when they are not being bullied, tired, hungry, and under stress.”

1st Place – Patrick O’Brien, 9th grade

I am learning things like Advanced Geometry and Advanced Physics that I now thoroughly enjoy. But without my parents help, I may have never have gotten to do this and thus been slowed intellectually by far too easy classes. There are many kids like me, but with no parental support to help them skip a grade. My plan to fix this? The ideal high school has no age-based grades, but allows those who excel to rise through the low-level classes and secure their own future.”

How do you think your education will help you achieve your dreams?

3rd Place – Maya Dickinson, 6th grade

“Do you ever see people on television working with wild animals that you can only imagine touching or getting close to? I do all the time, and that is why my dream is to be a zoologist and experience the beauty of wildlife just like the people on television.”

2nd Place – JC Nguyen, 6th grade

“My dream is to become an orthopedic surgeon, which takes a lot of strength, time, training, and education. The reason why a good education is important to me is because if you want a job, it has to come with those hardworking years of effort you put in school.”

1st Place – Kiari Ellison, 6th grade

“See, my mom says that school is my job, so each day I go to school, it’s like another day of work. My teachers are my bosses and my paycheck will be the knowledge that I get to keep forever. I know that I have to put forth a good effort and master as many skills as I can daily, in order to prepare myself for the career of my dreams – a scientist/inventor. “

There is much work to do to improve schools across the globe, says Geetha Kanniah, 17, a Correspondent from Malaysia, who describes  attributes that she would like to see as common standards for all schools.

My dream school is first of all a school where life begins with the teacher who is full of passion and liveliness. The teacher not only grabs the students attention but keeps them on the edge of their seats wanting to know more. His or her enthusiasm ignites that spark of excitement that opens receiving minds to wider fields of knowledge. Such a teacher asks more questions from the students, explores with the students and is a friend to them. 

My dream school is a school where teaching methods vary from the use of contemporary technologies like robotics to out-of-class experiences.  Those experiences are important because they do not confine students to the four walls of a classroom. 

There would also be integrated learning of subjects both in the Arts and Sciences so that the education received would not be about confining but expanding. Given choices, students get a sense of freedom, can express opinions and will be more sociable. All these make them better persons in society, possessing a wide range of skills. 

My dream school would be complete with amazing facilities like classroom labs, pools, and gyms. A library and counselling centre would be at hand to enable students to be more familiar with their subjects and themselves. Studying in a hands-on environment allows students to use their five senses to gain knowledge. It moulds them to be excited about their abilities and excel with them. Also at hand would be a canteen stocked with healthy food. A balanced diet is vital for students who spend many hours in school. Clean, non-processed, nutritious food is a key feeding requirement for students. 

Foreign exchange programs in my dream school would create understanding and respect. They would satisfy curiosities and instil intercultural awareness. They would be open to all students, rich and poor. Including students from all parts of the world would make this education truly global. 

Sports would be given equal emphasis with academics. After all, education is not only for the mind but for the whole self – mentally and physically. Sporting activities instil a healthy lifestyle by encouraging students to be physically fit, emotionally strong, and have good self-esteem. They build team spirit, and at the same time encourage individuality. Through sports, people from different backgrounds meet and learn to respect each other. 

Academic subjects must be relevant. The syllabus would include significant impact fields like environmental studies, political views, and economic struggles. It would grab the attention of students and lead them to action. 

Improving schools would require international collaboration. Such cooperation would encourage dialogue and lead to common standards. Nelson Mandela once said, “Education is the great engine of development. It is through education that the daughter of a peasant can become a doctor, that the son of a mineworker can become the head of the mine, that the child of farm workers can become the president of a great nation”.  

Education can bring a change in someone’s future as Mr. Mandela observed. The struggle to keep fulfilling that observation must be made by us. Students need to be inspired, amazed and be aware of endless opportunities. 

While school is the best thing that ever happened to mankind, there is still yet more to do.

 Photo credit: scottwills via photopincc

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About me:

I am a Malaysian, who looks for adventure and thrill, and is passionate about sports. I enjoy tennis, swimming, badminton and most recently, longboarding. I also spend a lot of my time with my camera, capturing as much as I can, while documenting them on my blog: journeywithacamera.wordpress.com.  

My travels give me the exposure to learn about the world. And to know and do more, I volunteer with different organizations, particularly in the marine field. My ambition is to be an explorer and to reach out to people.

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Opinions expressed in this article are those of the author and do not necessarily represent the views of the Commonwealth Youth Programme. Articles are published in a spirit of dialogue, respect and understanding. If you disagree, why not submit a response?

To learn more about becoming a Commonwealth Correspondent please visit: http://www.yourcommonwealth.org/submit-articles/commonwealthcorrespondents/

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